Monday, October 23, 2017

Week 10 Story: The Pig Who Pitied the Oxen

NOTE: Please read the updated version of this story located in my Portfolio website.
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Pig munched on the sweet fruit, crisp grains, and crunchy vegetables that were his dinner as the oxen, Big Red and Little Red, were unharnessed for the day. He watched the two with pity as they laboriously chewed their tasteless straw and grass.

Pig shook his head as he thought about the miseries that the oxen must endure every day. They must wake up at dawn and spend the entire day exhausting themselves with back-breaking labor. When they get home, they eat food that’s barely edible. They work and work and work, with no rest, and there wasn’t a single pleasure to make up for it.

Pig’s life was the picture of blissful happiness. He woke up when he wanted, and immediately dove into a delicious breakfast. After he’d eaten, he might roll in mud or play with some of the other animals. He spent hours daydreaming and finding shapes in the clouds. He ate when he was hungry, slept when he was tired, and played when he wanted to play. His life was happy, and he was happy with it.

One day, as he blissfully crunched on an apple, Pig overheard Big Red and Little Red talking about him. He listened as Little Red complained about the difference in their food and Pig’s food, and he heard Big Red tell his brother about the wedding feast and Pig’s sacrifice.

Pig already knew that he was being fattened for the table. He’d always known. He couldn’t understand why Big Red and Little Red found that to be such a horror. All animals died, eventually. Death was the one certainty of the universe, and nothing could escape it. The important thing wasn’t to evade death, as nothing has that power. The point of life is to enjoy what you have, while you have it, since there’s no guarantee for the future.


Pig couldn’t imagine living a life like the oxen. It was one enduring misery after another. He wondered why anyone would bear that, much less want to extend it. Pig decided that he would much rather have fewer good years of life than many, many horrible ones. It isn’t the length of your life that matters, its how much living you do on the journey.


Author's Note: In the story, The Ox Who Never Envied the Pig, two oxen spend all day working and carrying the farmer's load. In exchange, they are fed straw and grass. The pig that lives on the farm is fed rich, good food every day, because he is being fattened up as the main course for a wedding. One of the oxen tells the other that it isn't fair that the pig gets fed so much better when it's the oxen who do all the work. The other oxen says that they shouldn't be jealous, the pig is eating the food of death. In the end, the pig is slaughtered and the two oxen are happy with their crap food, because unlike the pig, they will have a long life. I wanted to tell the story from the pig's point of view. Perhaps the pig is equally happy with his own lot in life. He might look at the oxen, slaving away all day and living on dead grass, and think that he has the better end of the bargain. Yes, his life will be cut short, but he actually gets to enjoy the life that he has. Is it better to live 100 miserable years of nothing but toil and bad food, or 20 good years of enjoyment and pleasure? After all, death comes for all of us in the end, the when is irrelevant.


BibliographyThe Jatakas Tales of India by Ellen Babbitt. Web Source.

4 comments:

  1. Nancy,

    I really enjoyed this retelling you have done! I think you do a good job of setting the scene in the opening paragraph, however you could definitely be more detailed. I would also perhaps add a few more photos. That is something I have been trying to add to my stories and other assignments, after completing an editing challenge for my project. Overall, your story is easy to read and well done.

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  2. Nancy, I actually read another retelling of this story over the weekend and I like that each have different styles and aspects. Trying not to compare, but the other story was more humorous, yet you took yours more seriously. I love that you told the story from the pig's point of view, because it displays a much more realistic view. As you ended with not how much life we have but the way we live it, is such a great lesson and something we should all consider thinking about. Great job!

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  3. Nancy,

    I read this story as well and think you did a great job of telling this story from a different perspective. You did a great job with word usage and being very descriptive. I thought that this story was funny from the oxen perspective so I liked getting to read it from the other side that ends up getting killed. Great story and Keep up the great work!

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  4. Nancy,

    Great story! I did not expect it to end the way it did. I thought you were going down the road of the pig not knowing it was going to die and then BAM it was going to be distraught when it realized why it had been treated so great. I liked your ending way better. What a great lesson there was to enjoy the life you live because you only get once chance at it. Great job!

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