Showing posts with label Week 2. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 2. Show all posts

Tuesday, August 29, 2017

Feedback Thoughts

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I read the articles 8 Things Students Should Do When They Make a Mistake and Silence the Critical Voices in Your Head. The advice for students in the first article seemed spot on, particularly in finding a balance in your life and being willing to ask for help when you need it. It's very easy to fall into a rough spot, but not want to bother other people with it. It's sometimes difficult to see how understanding and helpful people can be when given the opportunity.

The article about silencing your own critical voice really struck a chord with me. I used to be extremely self critical. I always felt that I wasn't as smart people told me I was, and I would tear myself apart over any perceived weakness. It took a long time to develop the self confidence necessary to accept honest criticism graciously. However, I think it's important to present criticism kindly, and to give positive feedback in addition to the negative. When I am in a position to give feedback, I make sure to only say something if it is helpful, and if I can say it in a way that doesn't cause undue distress.

Topic Brainstorm: Too Many Options, Too Little Time

Ravana (Wikimedia)
Rakshasas - I really love the Kate Daniels book series, it's an urban fantasy series by Ilona Andrews. The third book in the series, Magic Strikes, has Kate and some of her allies fighting against a team of rakshasas in a gladiatorial style tournament. Since reading it, I have been particularly interested in this supernatural creature, and have wanted to learn about them. I was thinking that I would probably approach the project by focusing on the three brothers: Ravana, Vibhishana, and Kumbhakarna.

Reincarnation - I have always liked the concept of reincarnation. Although, I don't believe in it, it has a certain logic that I appreciate. People are not all good or all bad, so when contemplating the idea of an afterlife, it doesn't make much sense to divide them into only two possible categories, with their eternal destination being based on that simplistic categorization. Being reborn, and getting the opportunity to learn and get it right, is a reasonable compromise. I know very little about the Hindu approach to reincarnation, so I'm interested in learning more.

Karma - Like reincarnation, I have a very general interest in the concept of karma, but little actual knowledge. The difficulty with this subject is how exactly to approach it. Daśaratha and Arjuna seem like a good place to start.

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Supernatural Characters of the Ramayana - The particular topics me, because I love supernatural creatures/people (like Rakshasas) and it seems to provide a variety of approaches. I would like to find a way to incorporate Surasa and Kubera, because what I've read about them so far is really interesting and I'd like to learn more.

Friday, August 25, 2017

Week 2 Story: A Jungle Can Hide Many Secrets

NOTE: Please read the updated version of this story is located in my short story Portfolio Website

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The men hacked their way through the jungle, fighting viciously for every foot of progress that they made. They’d run out of food the day before, and unless they found a water source quickly, they wouldn’t make it another two days. The rendezvous point, with its waiting helicopter, was a three day walk north. Aiden lowered his machete, needing a moment to rest more than he’d ever needed anything in his life. Looking around at his six companions, men that he had been through so much with, he realized that he’d lost any semblance of hope for their survival. He closed his eyes and felt himself droop. “Captain, do you hear that?” Aiden opened his eyes, “Hear what?” “It sounds like there’s a woman singing over there.” The men froze, no one even breathed. After standing motionless for what felt like forever, Aiden heard it off to the left of their position. It was definitely a woman, and she was close. Feeling a renewed sense of purpose, Aiden began frantically hacking at vines, making a beeline toward the mysterious song.

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The trees and lush undergrowth seemed to disappear from one step to the next, and the exhausted men stumbled into a large clearing that was dominated by what appeared to be the ruins of an ancient temple. Seven small and tidy thatched roof cottages surrounded the imposing ruin. The singing woman had frozen at the edge of a small pond, seeming surprised by the sudden appearance of sweaty, disheveled men. Hesitantly, the woman began to step towards the group, smiling in welcome, and asking who they were. Achingly weary, and swamped by a sense of relief that was so intense that it was painful, Aiden didn’t think to question how the strange woman spoke English. The beautiful woman, who introduced herself as Dakini, said that her village would be happy to provide food, water, and shelter. 

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After bathing and gorging themselves, Aiden and his men met with the other residents of the village. There were seven of them, and they were all stunningly beautiful women. “We were always a small village,” Dakini explained, “but a year ago all of our husbands and children went missing. We never found what happened to them. The village is rich in food, there is little work for us to do, but we are lonely. We have prayed every night that we might find new husbands one day. Please, get some rest and we will talk again tomorrow.” Alone with his men, Aiden asked his men their thoughts about the woman’s tale. Conversation went back and forth for several minutes, before coming to a consensus. Sam, the oldest member of the group summed up the groups thoughts, “Captain, we’re mercenaries. We have no family, no one that loves us, no friends except for each other. Maybe we found this place for a reason. Maybe this is fate.” So, the men determined to offer themselves as husbands to the most beautiful women that they had ever seen. They settled into village life, and for several weeks the men enjoyed the first sense of peace and happiness that any of them could remember. However, Aiden could not shake off the feeling that something wasn’t right in the village. One night, waking up from a nightmare that he couldn’t quite remember, Aiden realized that he was alone in the cottage. 

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Slipping quietly into the night’s darkness, he heard chanting coming from the ruins of the temple. Flowing from shadow to shadow, he quietly made his way to the door and slowly peaked inside. What he saw would be imprinted on his mind for the rest of his life: seven hideous  goblins, wearing the clothes of the village women, feasting on the flesh of a spitted, roasted man. Aiden stumbled back to his cottage, realizing that if he wanted to save his men, he would have to act like nothing was wrong when his wife returned. The next day, while the wives were off washing clothes in the stream, Aiden gathered his men and told them what he saw. At first, several doubted Aiden’s account. But, he was their captain. He had saved them all on many occasions, and such trust is not easily broken. The men realized that they would have to escape quickly before they became dinner themselves. Grabbing what supplies they could carry, the seven men set off through the jungle, headed north. Aiden and his men traveled through the jungle as quickly as they could, constantly looking over their shoulders, terrified that the goblins would find them. When they stumbled into the rendezvous point three hours later, they were stunned speechless. It was far closer than they had thought, and the helicopter was still waiting. Relieved, the men piled into the chopper as quickly as they could, and told the pilot to take off immediately. As they lifted up above the jungle, Aiden looked down into the upturned face of his goblin wife. His men had survived, he had gotten them out safely, but he would forever have nightmares about how close a call it had been.


Author's Note - I chose to do a variation of the jataka called Goblin City. In the story, 500 shipwrecked sailors arrive on the goblin island of Ceylon, which was filled with female goblins. They marry the goblin women, not knowing that they are man eaters who marry men for a time, but then eat them after they grow bored. The captain discovers this ruse and tells his men. Some believe him and some don't. The ones who do escape with him thanks to the help of a fairy on a flying horse. The ones who don't stay and get eaten. I liked many of the ideas in this story, such as the goblins ability to create illusions. However, in mine I limited their illusion to their appearance. I also used fewer people, because I didn't want it to feel unwieldy. One of the most important changes that I made is that I didn't have any of the men disbelieve their captain. I didn't want anyone left behind to get eaten.

Bibliography - Goblin city from The Giant Crab, and Other Tales from Old India by W. H. D. Rouse. Web source

Thursday, August 24, 2017

Reading Notes: Goblin City

Taraka Vadh (Wikimedia)

I think that there are about a thousand ways to use the story about Goblin City as an inspiration. The story of sailors who are shipwrecked on an island full of man-eating she goblins, who marry human men, then eat them. Some of those men escape, while a few stay behind to become dinner. There were a couple of details within the story that I saw as a jumping off point to create my own:

- Demons who have the ability to alter the perception of reality

- A society full of women who use men for a short period of time for breeding purposes, then kill them (it reminded me a bit of the Amazons).

- The addition of the demon women using the men as a source of food in addition to a breeding source.

Tuesday, August 22, 2017

Interesting Reading Options

There were many interesting reading options in the UnTextbook to supplement our readings of the Ramayana and the Mahabharata. It will be difficult to narrow down were I want to focus my attention, but there were several stories that stood out to me.

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One of the first readings that sparked my interest was the story about Krishna written by Sister Nivedita. I liked the fact that the religious significance of the Krishna stories is a focus of this author, because I want to understand him in that particular context.

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Another good reading option that jumped out at me was Sunity Devee's retelling of stories about Sita, Promila, and Shakuntala. I like the idea of seeing these stories from the women's point of view.

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For the same reason, I am looking forward to reading Sunity Devee's stories about Savitri, Damayanti, Sati, and Uttara. Women are so often given short shrift in stories, particularly older stories. They might be plot devices, impediments, or catalysts, but it sometimes seems that they rarely get a fleshed out representation.