Laila and Majnu (Wikipedia) |
The baby Krishna
had performed another miracle. No one had known that spirits had been trapped
for long years underneath the roots of two ancient trees. The baby had freed
them, giggling joyfully.
Yasoda,
Krishna’s foster mother, goggled with shock at the ephemeral spirits. One
appeared to be a man, the other a woman. She couldn’t imagine how they had been
trapped or why.
“So, why were
you two trapped under those trees?” Yasoda gave in to the urgings of her
curiosity.
“We were trapped
there long ago by an evil sorcerer.” The spirit with the female aspect answered
Yasoda’s question.
“Will you tell
me your story?” Yasoda asked.
“Of course. It
will help us to talk about it,” the spirit woman replied. My name is Laila.
This man was my love when we lived. His name is Majnu.”
Majnu nodded in
respect to the mother of his lord and began to relate the sad tale of the two
lovers. “We had loved each other for years, but Laila’s father refused my offer
of marriage until I had a better life to offer. I worked hard to build
something that Laila and her father could be proud of. We were just about to
get our blessing when the evil sorcerer showed up.”
Laila nodded and
continued the story. “The sorcerer was a cruel, greasy man. He asked my father
for my hand in marriage, but I begged my father to deny him. I loved Majnu, and
even if I didn’t, I was horrified at the prospect of marrying such a terrible
person.”
“We convinced
Laila’s father to reject the sorcerer’s offer, but he wouldn’t take no for an
answer. He cursed us and trapped us under the roots of these two trees. The
sorcerer swore that if he couldn’t have what he wanted, then no one else could
have it. It amused him to trap us so close together, but with no way to reach
each other. We knew we would be trapped there until our lord would come to free
us. It has felt like forever.” Majnu finished their tragic tale.
“But, now we are
free. We did not get a life together, but Majnu and I will spend eternity side
by side. Bless you and your divine son for releasing us from that terrible
prison.” Laila began to shimmer out of sight as she finished her expression of
gratitude.
“Yes, thank you.
We are grateful for this blessing from our lord, Krishna.” Majnu also faded
away to nothing.
Yasoda shook her
head in consternation. The world is a very strange place when you are mother to
a god. Shrugging her shoulders, she decided to just accept the weirdness as it
came. Her decision made, she picked up her giggling son and went back to her
work.
Author's Note: In the stories about the Divine Childhood of Krishna, many different miracles and unusual events that occurred around the child are talked about. One of those is about the time that his foster mother tied the boy to an axle in an effort to keep him from wandering while she was busy doing work. There were two ancient trees growing close together, and the idea was that the axle would be too heavy for the child to drag. In the event that he was able to drag it, the axle would wedge between the two trees and limit his movement. However, Krishna was not only able to easily drag the heavy axle, but after it wedged itself between the trees, he was able to pull the trees down. After the trees were uprooted, two spirits appeared. They claimed that they had been held captive, by a spell, under the trees for many years. Krishna had saved them from their prison. I was curious about the two spirits. I thought that they should be lovers who were kept apart by an evil sorcerer. The sorcerer lusted for the woman, but she rejected his advances in favor of her poor, but kind and honorable lover. Enraged by jealousy, the sorcerer imprisons the two under the trees, so that they are apart, but tortured by their closeness. For the names of the two spirits, I chose the two famous star-crossed lovers from an old eastern story: Laila and Majnu.
Bibliography: Cradle Tales of Hinduism by Sister Nivedita. Web source.
Nancy,
ReplyDeleteWhat a great story. I didn't get a chance to read a lot of Krishna's stories, so this is the first time I've gotten a taste of the "Divine Childhood." I like the way you tell it so much that I dont know if I'd enjoy the original! I love that you gave a background to the two spirits. I think that was a very creative touch, and it really answered a question all readers have when reading the original. Great job!
Nancy, I also wrote a story about baby/child Krishna this week! Mine is from the perspective of his mother, Yashoda, so it is great to see her as a central character here. The one thing that I would suggest would be to elongate some of your paragraphs, especially in the first half of the story. That way, they are a bit more substantial and match the second half! Good job!
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ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your story, “Laila and Majnu.” Also I really the image you added to this story because I feel like it represent your story perfectly. I think it was nice for you to have your character share in dialogue. I feel like that always makes the story more interesting. Overall, I think you did a great job and I can’t wait to explore the rest of your stories you have created so far.
Hey Nancy! You did a great job on your story! I haven't read a Krishna story this week so this is the first time I read anything about Divine Childhood. So reading your Author's Note was really enlightening. You did a great job writing your story. after reading your Author's Note I could tell that you kept aspects of the original but made this story your own! you did an amazing job!
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